princefarming (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)

Thought I would post one more comment just to get you to 500! Please see my earlier comment. Down to the wire... There are tons of comments to go through here. good luck

andrewmarsvolta (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)

Take me to the airwaves...This rock song is all mine....Put me on repeat...play it for all time...Turn the station up....let me loose control...Play loud and louder...Give me my radio.....

artnjazz (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)

How about...Play my song today

SheridanODonnell (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)

Thanks.

xthetriforcex (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)

*nineteen A-A-tee-ees (1980's)*pumping through my veins (keep veins on a lower note)*repeat previous 2 lines*plus 1980's once more=5 lines

jonbashjonbash (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)

I really like "We're falling back in time." Just that, I think, would be nice.

thehalo2renegade (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)

Simple, Clever, and fits perfectly into the songDont you take my tunes awayyy..You can't take my tunes awayyy.My rock is here to stay!!!Cause we are gonna playyy...The best of yesterdayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!kind of a mix of actionpink and bleed0range's bridge lyrics, it think it sounds pretty sweet, maybe tweek it a bit

SheridanODonnell (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)

Just a little explication of my lyrics. The bridge is very trance-like so I wanted to keep the same one line lyric throughout. Also, the lyrics, "We're falling back in time!" compliments the trance (if you can envision person falling through a quantum leap-esque Austin Powers 2 time portal). In terms of context, the actual time travel is great because it leads the climax of the song (the final chorus). The verses explain that we're going back in time,and the bridge is the actual event.

SheridanODonnell (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)

This sounds great Rivers (and the gang). My lyrics:We're falling back in time!Fuh Fuh Fuh Falling back in time!We're falling back in time!Fuh Fuh Fuh Falling back in time!WE'RE FALLING BACK IN TIIIIIME! (or maybe AND NOW WE'RE RIGHT ON TIIIIME!)The stutter sounds great with the bridge. One more suggestion (purely opinion). When I jam to this song the chorus is so incredibly catchy I always feel like it's going to repeat, and it doesn't so maybe a repeat on the second chorus.

ElectricHorse (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)

we'll sing along all day